Could you please paste the draft (e.g., your own subtitles, a synopsis, a review you wrote, or a scene script)?
It looks like you're asking for a review of a draft or a specific version of Trapped (Icelandic: Ófærð ) — Season 2, from 2015, with English subtitles. However, the request is missing the actual draft text you'd like me to review. Trapped -2015- - season 2 -Eng subs-